chapter 1 the journey to pandrimer island

4 Responses to chapter 1 the journey to pandrimer island

1. Mrs Hedley says:

   February 1, 2012 at 11:59 am

   I like that you have used an ellipsis at the end to leave your readers in suspense.

   What do you mean by “girlie type”?
2. shai says:

   February 1, 2012 at 4:14 pm

   I really liked the story, the suspense at the end was great – what happens next???? I can’t wait for chapter 2!!!
3. brida says:

   March 23, 2012 at 10:14 am

   Very good story, but you might add capitals and punctuation. Also, why were you hiding under the bed? 3/5
4. harry says:

   March 23, 2012 at 10:19 am

   I like this work and find it very funny.

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