I thought your story is amazing. It made me laugh most of the way through it. It had brilliant words such as obnoxiously and oak front door. I don’t think you should change the word junky but maybe add another adjective in after that e.g rusty, old or greasy.
very good, had a lot of good words like hunched,timid I cant wait for the rest of it, but maybe you should change the word ‘ junky’.
Jake
Your story is brilliant were do you get the brilliant words from
Please keep blogging.
I thought your story is amazing. It made me laugh most of the way through it. It had brilliant words such as obnoxiously and oak front door. I don’t think you should change the word junky but maybe add another adjective in after that e.g rusty, old or greasy.