Hello Grace, thanks for taking part in the 100WC. You have certainly used a great range of vocabulary in this piece. Well done. You have described the Phlamocon’s actions well; but I am not really sure what he looks like! A few more clues to that would have made this even better than it already is.
Hello Grace, thanks for taking part in the 100WC. You have certainly used a great range of vocabulary in this piece. Well done. You have described the Phlamocon’s actions well; but I am not really sure what he looks like! A few more clues to that would have made this even better than it already is.
i agree