Hi Jessica,
I really like your letter; it made me think about going to help to. In my od school there was a girl called Fatima. Maybe to improve you can write about why it is stupid to say how bad you feel for them. Are they real? What inspired you to write this?
What a thoughtful letter Jessica! i really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry – I can tell you’ve really thought about Fatimata and Roukayatou’s lives and I like the way that you’ve explained how your feelings about your own life have changed. Going to the website to find ways to help is a great idea, too!
Hi Jessica,
I really like your letter; it made me think about going to help to. In my od school there was a girl called Fatima. Maybe to improve you can write about why it is stupid to say how bad you feel for them. Are they real? What inspired you to write this?
What a thoughtful letter Jessica! i really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry – I can tell you’ve really thought about Fatimata and Roukayatou’s lives and I like the way that you’ve explained how your feelings about your own life have changed. Going to the website to find ways to help is a great idea, too!