Hi Hope,
I love the way that every time you write a peice you com,e back with one even better. I like the enclosed ryming cuplets style you have used but then I like it when you break the pattern at the end. To make it better I think you should keep the same amount of syliballs in each line. What made you write about winter. Because where I am the sun is almost unbearable? Well done.
Hi Hope,
I love the way that every time you write a peice you com,e back with one even better. I like the enclosed ryming cuplets style you have used but then I like it when you break the pattern at the end. To make it better I think you should keep the same amount of syliballs in each line. What made you write about winter. Because where I am the sun is almost unbearable? Well done.
Grace