The Boxing Match

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2 Responses to The Boxing Match

  1. mellj says:

    Hey Rafi I love this piece of work you have got a real talent.I really like how you put it in time order and you have got amazing languge.You have also got a really good use of puncuation.Tata cherio for now.

  2. zaida says:

    Hey Rafi I love your work it’s so good that I can imagine that i’m in it.I really like how you describe the boxing match.
    I like how you used your languge. I don’t think you can improve it.

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