Hi Maddie M, I really like the way you have used the colour ( For blue you have used the colour blue to write it ) Dilan
Well done Maddie, that was a very good descriptive piece of writing and I loved how you used screamed and chuckled instead of just said, said, said, said. Keep up the good work! Maddie P.
Hi Maddie, I really enjoyed your story and thought you described the fireworks really well. Check your spelling it is thrown not throne. Justine
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Hi Maddie M,
I really like the way you have used the
colour ( For blue you have used the colour blue to write it )
Dilan
Well done Maddie, that was a very good descriptive piece of writing and I loved how you used screamed and chuckled
instead of just said, said, said, said. Keep up the good work!
Maddie P.
Hi Maddie,
I really enjoyed your story and thought you described the fireworks really well.
Check your spelling it is thrown not throne.
Justine