I liked how you told the reader about how the character of your mum in this text and that she is a sculptor. However you can include more adjectives and description, Also the spelling of telephones is wrong.
🙂 -Jamie
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I liked how you told the reader about how the character of your mum in this text and that she is a sculptor.
However you can include more adjectives and description, Also the spelling of telephones is wrong.
🙂 -Jamie