What a great imagination you have Rosie! This house sounds really strange and the tall young man sounds pretty odd too. Well done for squeezing some connectives and description in. Try re-drafting your second sentence, I think you can do better! A great 100 words!
I wonder how Santa would get into that house?…
What a great imagination you have Rosie! This house sounds really strange and the tall young man sounds pretty odd too. Well done for squeezing some connectives and description in. Try re-drafting your second sentence, I think you can do better! A great 100 words!
I wonder how Santa would get into that house?…