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Star 1: Well done on the exelent use of speech, you used it correctly by using a new line for a new speeker, well done for using a capital letter at the begining of your speeker.
Star 2: You have descirbed the setting of your story really well.
Wish: Dont forget to count your words before you send it because you have 103 words.
Well done, will you please visit http://www.5t2012.highlawnprimary.net