Dear Luca,
I really like your animal name I have never heard of a hedgehog and a leopard meet, however it’s a really good. I also I like how you have used ‘aerodynamic’ and I like how you have used adjectives to descript the underwater car. Maybe next time you could add who does it belong or what kind of animal works in the underwater car?
From
Tulsi at High Lawn
Visit us at http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net
I agree with Tulsi, you’ve written a fabulous description of the underwater car, and I’d love to see you develop your idea by giving more information about the Scubalog who owns it!
Dear Luca,
I really like your animal name I have never heard of a hedgehog and a leopard meet, however it’s a really good. I also I like how you have used ‘aerodynamic’ and I like how you have used adjectives to descript the underwater car. Maybe next time you could add who does it belong or what kind of animal works in the underwater car?
From
Tulsi at High Lawn
Visit us at http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net
I agree with Tulsi, you’ve written a fabulous description of the underwater car, and I’d love to see you develop your idea by giving more information about the Scubalog who owns it!