The toaster

1 Response to The toaster

1. Gabriella says:

   January 1, 2013 at 5:36 pm

   Hi Jamie,
   Great little story you produced there! You have some good personifications like
   ‘shows no mercy to anything’ or ‘the toaster is a mean bread killing robot.’ I like the
   way you make the toaster seem like a monster or a deadly robot. However some things
   don’t make sense and in some places you forgot a capital letter.
   Great story!!!!!

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