Flames crackled and seared as I desperately tried to outmaneuver the fire. I jumped over a column of flames but it seemed to have a kind of magnetic force field. So far I was not having a good time in Paris despite it being my birthday. I knelt down ready to accept death just as I remembered my tiny, silver lucky charm dangling from my necklace. I quickly unstrapped it and held it up to my eyes. It shimmered, its way of saying what do you command. “Take me elsewhere…” I couldn’t manage any more. Suddenly a bright flash of light and my body cascaded forward, to safety, far beyond any sort of fire.
Flames crackled and seared as I desperately tried to outmaneuver the fire. I jumped over a column of flames but it seemed to have a kind of magnetic force field. So far I was not having a good time in Paris despite it being my birthday. I knelt down ready to accept death just as I remembered my tiny, silver lucky charm dangling from my necklace. I quickly unstrapped it and held it up to my eyes. It shimmered, its way of saying what do you command. “Take me elsewhere…” I couldn’t manage any more. Suddenly a bright flash of light and my body cascaded forward, to safety, far beyond any sort of fire.
Amazing piece of work. My whole family enjoyed reading it.