*Nice describing word like:inched,deathly grey,depressing,twisted crimson,bleakly and vortex.
*I like the part where there’s a sentence:”Oh not you again”Tom shouted,the crystal mirror just stared down at him bleakly, it’s swirling glass pulled him in.
WISH: can you check your punctuation:.,?!’,…-/:;()
*Nice describing word like:inched,deathly grey,depressing,twisted crimson,bleakly and vortex.
*I like the part where there’s a sentence:”Oh not you again”Tom shouted,the crystal mirror just stared down at him bleakly, it’s swirling glass pulled him in.
WISH: can you check your punctuation:.,?!’,…-/:;()