It is good in many ways, for-instance it rhymes most of the time. You could keep the beats the same in the sentences but that is not much to worry about. I cant see any mistakes so overall it is a good poem…
It’s so nice to read a poem on the blog, Anna. Have you been on the website for the Children’s Poetry Archive? You can hear lots of different poets like Michael Rosen and Alan Ahlberg reading their poems.
thats brilliant anna I really like the poem and it rhymes well and has got a good speed and rythem to it and also you added some nice snappy and short sentences to it. When did you get the idea of writing apoem about a cup of tea? Next time you could add a bit more punctuation to it to make it a bit more ecxiting . Any way that doesnt matter it was a peice of cleverness!
Hi Anna, It’s Mia’s mum here. All my favourite people are tea lovers. Your poem is brilliant. Brilliantly funny, brilliantly original. Put the kettle on.
This is making my mouth water! Nice rhyming! What is your best poem?
Evie
I’m not quite sure I like them all really
Wow that was incredible. Did you really make that up by your self? Keep up the good work!
From Rafi
LOVE IT WELL DONE
I have got my cup of tea. Now I am hungry. Can you write a sequel about pie?
Your Dad.
It is good in many ways, for-instance it rhymes most of the time. You could keep the beats the same in the sentences but that is not much to worry about. I cant see any mistakes so overall it is a good poem…
It’s so nice to read a poem on the blog, Anna. Have you been on the website for the Children’s Poetry Archive? You can hear lots of different poets like Michael Rosen and Alan Ahlberg reading their poems.
thats brilliant anna I really like the poem and it rhymes well and has got a good speed and rythem to it and also you added some nice snappy and short sentences to it. When did you get the idea of writing apoem about a cup of tea? Next time you could add a bit more punctuation to it to make it a bit more ecxiting . Any way that doesnt matter it was a peice of cleverness!
Hi Anna, It’s Mia’s mum here. All my favourite people are tea lovers. Your poem is brilliant. Brilliantly funny, brilliantly original. Put the kettle on.