Life or Death

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3 Responses to Life or Death

  1. Jake says:

    Wow, incredible its so gripping. I want another chapter!

  2. Mrs Cohen says:

    Wow, what a wonderful piece of descriptive writing. All the description really helped me visualise the story. Remember to check the spelling of new or unfamiliar words. Can you spot the spelling mistakes you’ve made? Keep up the fantastic work!

  3. Can says:

    well done rafi, its very descriptive and it makes you wat to read on. keep it up

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