Hi Raphael,
There are loads of great things in this blog for- instanse: You really built up suspension like a proper writer. I loved how the last sentence really gulped you up and made you want to read more! Although, always remember to use a space after your punctuation. Keep on blogging.
Wow Raphael – what an amazing description you have created for your 100 word challenge entry. You have really captured the style of a fantasy story and I DEFINITELY wouldn’t want to be in the cave with that fearsome dragon! I would love to know what happened to your character next – if only it were a 200 word challenge 🙂
Just be careful to read through your entry before you post as you will spot any punctuation you’ve accidentally missed.
I look forward to reading your future entries – keep up the superb writing!
hey raphel this is awesome i like it when you say that there was blood on the walls from his last victim but make shure some of your sentences make sence. 🙂 i hope you keep entering the 100wc
Hi Raphael,
There are loads of great things in this blog for- instanse: You really built up suspension like a proper writer. I loved how the last sentence really gulped you up and made you want to read more! Although, always remember to use a space after your punctuation. Keep on blogging.
Wow Raphael – what an amazing description you have created for your 100 word challenge entry. You have really captured the style of a fantasy story and I DEFINITELY wouldn’t want to be in the cave with that fearsome dragon! I would love to know what happened to your character next – if only it were a 200 word challenge 🙂
Just be careful to read through your entry before you post as you will spot any punctuation you’ve accidentally missed.
I look forward to reading your future entries – keep up the superb writing!
What a super piece of writing Raphael. You have create great suspense with your description of the scene. Brilliant!
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Oh my! I think this guy is in trouble!
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hey raphel this is awesome i like it when you say that there was blood on the walls from his last victim but make shure some of your sentences make sence. 🙂 i hope you keep entering the 100wc
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