What a beautiful story with a happy ending, Laila!
I like the dragon`s name. Azuza sound like `asustar`, a Spanish word that means `to scare`.
Please remember to write all names of people and places with capital letters.
Keep up the great work, Laila!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Wow, what an action packed story Laila!
You used the prompt very well.
Well Done for joining in with the 100WC!
Well done Laila, your piece of writing is very imaginative. Your name is beautiful! Remember to check your punctuation!
What a beautiful story with a happy ending, Laila!
I like the dragon`s name. Azuza sound like `asustar`, a Spanish word that means `to scare`.
Please remember to write all names of people and places with capital letters.
Keep up the great work, Laila!
Kind regards,
Diethild
To Laila
I think it is really good but mabey don’t say laila that much
but it was really good
From beatrix