Wow Freya, what a great piece of writing! I especially like the way that you began your story with ‘one day’. I also really enjoyed some of the adventurous vocabulary you used like ‘slaughtered’ and ‘terrified’. Keep up the good work 🙂
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Wow Freya, what a great piece of writing! I especially like the way that you began your story with ‘one day’. I also really enjoyed some of the adventurous vocabulary you used like ‘slaughtered’ and ‘terrified’. Keep up the good work 🙂