Hi Alex,
Wow! What an imaginative and creative story! Your use of language was brilliant
and your first two sentences really grasped my attention. They make me think why
a mirror was so important and why the dragon was dying. I did not find one bit in
your story boring! I like how you make the thief seem defenceless and it is nice
how you make it a happy ending for the dragon!!! I am looking forwards to reading more
of your excellent story’s!!!
Hi Alex,
Wow! What an imaginative and creative story! Your use of language was brilliant
and your first two sentences really grasped my attention. They make me think why
a mirror was so important and why the dragon was dying. I did not find one bit in
your story boring! I like how you make the thief seem defenceless and it is nice
how you make it a happy ending for the dragon!!! I am looking forwards to reading more
of your excellent story’s!!!