Dear Mathew,
I really like your 100 word challenge because you have made it funny like ‘ lamas drove about in their awesome submarine car’ that is really fun because lamas can’t drive submarines. I also like ‘they jumped over a old granny and did a awesome air flip’ I can just imagine a lama jumping over a old lady and the old lady has just fainted. Maybe next time, you could add other animals like donkey you could really make funny sentences with donkeys.
From Tulsi at High Lawn
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Well done and keep it up!
Dear Mathew,
I really like your 100 word challenge because you have made it funny like ‘ lamas drove about in their awesome submarine car’ that is really fun because lamas can’t drive submarines. I also like ‘they jumped over a old granny and did a awesome air flip’ I can just imagine a lama jumping over a old lady and the old lady has just fainted. Maybe next time, you could add other animals like donkey you could really make funny sentences with donkeys.
From Tulsi at High Lawn
Visit us at http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net
Well done and keep it up!
wow i really enjoyed reading it i thought it was amazing