Hi Hal
Well Done this was a very imaginative blog post but maybe next time instead of saying I was jogging to my freinds house you could say I was racing to my friends house.
What a great piece of writing, and the choice of picture really enhanced it. I can see how carefully you have chosen different sentence starters, it made your writing really interesting to read, thank you!
Keep up the great writing
Miss T team 100wc
Hi Hal
Well Done this was a very imaginative blog post but maybe next time instead of saying I was jogging to my freinds house you could say I was racing to my friends house.
What a great piece of writing, and the choice of picture really enhanced it. I can see how carefully you have chosen different sentence starters, it made your writing really interesting to read, thank you!
Keep up the great writing
Miss T team 100wc