Hi Maddie Well Done this was a great blog post I couldn’t stop reading it was really exiting and made me want to read on.
Hello Maddie, I enjoyed this, the scene you describe is very real! You have chosen some excellent vocabulary to enhance your writing, I especially liked, ‘spotted,’ ‘muttered,’ ‘jogged,’ and ‘strutted.’ Well done!
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Hi Maddie
Well Done this was a great blog post I couldn’t stop reading it was really exiting and made me want to read on.
Hello Maddie, I enjoyed this, the scene you describe is very real! You have chosen some excellent vocabulary to enhance your writing, I especially liked, ‘spotted,’ ‘muttered,’ ‘jogged,’ and ‘strutted.’ Well done!