Wow Zach- this is a great piece of writing. I loved the alliteration, the emotions and I really want to know what had he done. Can I just clarify, how can a crowd gasp like a vampire whisper?
Ms Ashraf
Hello Zach,
I’m going to begin my analysis of your work with one candid compliment.
“You exaggerate the levels of prose for your age” – as you do, this work was most extraordinarily mature and the use of vocabulary was quite intriguing! Have you ever considered being an author as a career?, because you should, or if not; just find a job/career that exploits your English skills in the best way. As I assure you if you write like this you’ll impress many others excluding me.
Good Day,
Fred.
Wow Zach- this is a great piece of writing. I loved the alliteration, the emotions and I really want to know what had he done. Can I just clarify, how can a crowd gasp like a vampire whisper?
Ms Ashraf
Hello Zach,
I’m going to begin my analysis of your work with one candid compliment.
“You exaggerate the levels of prose for your age” – as you do, this work was most extraordinarily mature and the use of vocabulary was quite intriguing! Have you ever considered being an author as a career?, because you should, or if not; just find a job/career that exploits your English skills in the best way. As I assure you if you write like this you’ll impress many others excluding me.
Good Day,
Fred.