Lovely writing, great words and so much suspense. Can’t wait for next week so I can read whats going to happen!Only thing to improve, everything happened very fast. You could gather more suspense by making the whole thing a bit slower, so Its a bit more scary. Apart from that amazing writing, WELL DONE !!!
Lovely writing, great words and so much suspense. Can’t wait for next week so I can read whats going to happen!Only thing to improve, everything happened very fast. You could gather more suspense by making the whole thing a bit slower, so Its a bit more scary. Apart from that amazing writing, WELL DONE !!!