Lovely poem Armelle did you make it up?
I think this is a brilliant poem but occasionally you misspell a couple of words. Overall it describes almost everything about elephants!
Hi Armelle I really like your poem on elephants I also like the words that you had to put in to make it rhyme.If you could do it again how would you change it?
The poem was very amusing and funny and my best line was THEY DRINKFROM THERE NOSE AND LIKE TO POSE!Also you have put in great adjectives.
I like your description of the elephant and your rhyming sentences especially the one when you wrote they drink through there nose and like to pose.
Armelle I really enjoyed your poem it included lots amazing adjectives it made me giggle!
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Lovely poem Armelle did you make it up?
I think this is a brilliant poem but occasionally you misspell a couple of words. Overall it describes almost everything about elephants!
Hi Armelle I really like your poem on elephants I also like the words that you had to put in to make it rhyme.If you could do it again how would you change it?
The poem was very amusing and funny and my best line was THEY DRINKFROM THERE NOSE AND LIKE TO POSE!Also you have put in great adjectives.
I like your description of the elephant and your rhyming sentences especially the one when you wrote they drink through there nose and like to pose.
Armelle
I really enjoyed your poem it included lots amazing adjectives it made me giggle!