Hello Anna,
I like the way you used the school trip you went on as an inspiration to write a story. However, remember to read your work over and over again because there are a couple of spelling mistakes. Otherwise your work was very good and deserves a spotlight on the blog!
From Rafi’s Dad.
Hello Anna,
I like the way you used the school trip you went on as an inspiration to write a story. However, remember to read your work over and over again because there are a couple of spelling mistakes. Otherwise your work was very good and deserves a spotlight on the blog!
From Rafi’s Dad.