Hello Louis,
Your work really painted a picture in my head. You could have stuck to the 100 hundred word rule but otherwise it was very good!
From Rafi’s Mum.
Hello Louis,
Your work really proved your writing talents are incredible. The description really blew me away and your knowledge and use of connectives is excellent! Keep up he great work and maybe one day you will become an author.
Hello Louis,
Your work really painted a picture in my head. You could have stuck to the 100 hundred word rule but otherwise it was very good!
From Rafi’s Mum.
Hello Louis,
Your work really proved your writing talents are incredible. The description really blew me away and your knowledge and use of connectives is excellent! Keep up he great work and maybe one day you will become an author.
another lovely piece of writing. But I am always so frustrated as I want the story to go on for longer!