Hi Hope,
This is really good and you have used lots of great words such as “merely” and “croaky”.
Once you wrote “i” instead of “I” but I’m sure this was just a mistake so well done!
Next time, try to start a new line for speech.
Good work!
😉
Hope that was amazing! I thought you did really well and the story was funny too! Next time I think you should put a bit more speach marks in your writing. How did you get the idea of Mr.Wiggle?
Hi Hope,
This is really good and you have used lots of great words such as “merely” and “croaky”.
Once you wrote “i” instead of “I” but I’m sure this was just a mistake so well done!
Next time, try to start a new line for speech.
Good work!
😉
Yes,I agree with Jessica,I love the way you’ve described Mr. Wiggle and how he thinks he’s perfectly normal.
Hope that was amazing! I thought you did really well and the story was funny too! Next time I think you should put a bit more speach marks in your writing. How did you get the idea of Mr.Wiggle?