The stab

Posted on March 22, 2012 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The stab

  1. Jamie says:
    March 22, 2012 at 10:06 am

    Very good Harry
    .Good way of really getting the point across of your pain.
    .Nice description of “not so painful as it was at that particular time.”
    .Very Intresting description of the hospital
    But i think you could use a bit more Adjectives

    Jamie

  2. Anna W says:
    March 23, 2012 at 7:59 am

    Harry
    You used some great description for the pain.Is this true? It was a great story.

  3. Jesse says:
    March 29, 2012 at 8:51 am

    Hi Harry
    *good way of getting your point across
    *nice description
    *very intresting
    but work on more adjectives

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