She fell down the stairs

4 Responses to She fell down the stairs

1. Gabriel says:

   March 23, 2012 at 10:00 am

   I give it 8 out of 10. Because it has nice description, and has good nice ryming words.
2. Gabriel says:

   March 23, 2012 at 10:01 am

   I ive it 9 out of 10. Because it has nice description, and good ryhming words.
   • Grace says:

     March 23, 2012 at 7:58 pm

     Thank you for the comment. I do try to make things rhyme. What made you go up in rating?
3. Gabriel says:

   March 23, 2012 at 10:02 am

   I give it 9 out of 10. Because it has nice description, and good ryhming words.

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