Hi Evie,
This poem is brilliant and it is incredible how you got everything to rhyme. I learnt a lot from reading this.
I like how you wrote “there were lots more courses than he had divorces” but shouldn’t it be “than HENRY had divorces”?
Anyway this is really good and I hope you do another poem like this in the future as this one is amazing.
I agree with Jessica, this poem is spectacular and has very good rhymes in it…I hope I will see you do another poem like this again! (Plus the poem made me a bit hungry!)
Hi Evie,
This poem is brilliant and it is incredible how you got everything to rhyme. I learnt a lot from reading this.
I like how you wrote “there were lots more courses than he had divorces” but shouldn’t it be “than HENRY had divorces”?
Anyway this is really good and I hope you do another poem like this in the future as this one is amazing.
I agree with Jessica, this poem is spectacular and has very good rhymes in it…I hope I will see you do another poem like this again! (Plus the poem made me a bit hungry!)
Hi Evie, I also agree with Jessica. You have rymed words which make it much more interesting. I am looking forward to reading your next blog!