100 word challenge-the annoying brother

3 Responses to 100 word challenge-the annoying brother

1. Bert says:

   March 27, 2012 at 9:03 am

   I really like the way you have thought it through really well and all the annoying things your broyher can do.Were did you you get the idea to have your brother putting paper in your cereal?
   • Louis says:

     May 1, 2012 at 5:13 pm

     i got the idea from real life!
2. Ryan says:

   March 27, 2012 at 9:04 am

   Wow! I found it really interesting; it had lots of description. Perhaps maybe you could add more speech.

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