Wow Ryan. I like the use of description. What inspired you to write this? Has it happened to you? Maybe to improve you could make it a bit longer?
The discription is great I also like the dialog. If you were to do this piece of writing again would you improve any thing?
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this. You made it sound realistic as you described all of the waiter’s actions so well. Has this ever happened to you or a member of your family?
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Wow Ryan. I like the use of description. What inspired you to write this? Has it happened to you? Maybe to improve you could make it a bit longer?
The discription is great I also like the dialog. If you were to do this piece of writing again would you improve any thing?
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this. You made it sound realistic as you described all of the waiter’s actions so well. Has this ever happened to you or a member of your family?