I really liked your story it inspired me .I love the adjective you have used super well done ive got a picture in my head about the ankle that got twisted
Hello Matilda. I enjoyed your 100 WC entry. I partiularly liked the way you set the place and the time at the start of your writing. You have selected verbs carefully. Try working on sentence openers, try starting with a verb or an adverb to add variety to your writing. Well done, keep writing.
Hi Matilda, a great 100WC post. I loved all the drama and action in your piece, you are a very imaginative writer. Great use of language as it really engages the reader to picture the whole story as they are reading. Keep up the good work!
I really liked your story it inspired me .I love the adjective you have used super well done ive got a picture in my head about the ankle that got twisted
Hello Matilda. I enjoyed your 100 WC entry. I partiularly liked the way you set the place and the time at the start of your writing. You have selected verbs carefully. Try working on sentence openers, try starting with a verb or an adverb to add variety to your writing. Well done, keep writing.
Hi Matilda, a great 100WC post. I loved all the drama and action in your piece, you are a very imaginative writer. Great use of language as it really engages the reader to picture the whole story as they are reading. Keep up the good work!