How can I help you

Posted on March 27, 2012 by Deleted User
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  1. Dr. Lisa (Team 100WC) says:
    March 27, 2012 at 4:30 pm

    Shay,

    I really loved your description of James, “He was a joyful, funny, and also a bit cheeky chap. However smartly he dressed, he was still seemed to be scruffy.” I also like how you used the dialogue so that we could learn a little more about this cheeky boy.

    I hope to see you again in these challenges.

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