Liam, you must read the work that you have done carefully before publishing it. A couple of your sentences don’t make sense. You should also make more use of full stops.
Mum
Nice work Liam ,read your work more often to make sure your sentences make sense . But other than that well done !
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Liam, you must read the work that you have done carefully before publishing it. A couple of your sentences don’t make sense. You should also make more use of full stops.
Mum
Nice work Liam ,read your work more often to make sure your sentences make sense . But other than that well done !