Well done! Good effort Hope. I like the fact that you chose to write a poem. Adding a picture draws the readers attention. But just be careful you use. By any chance, are worms your favourite insect/animal? When you write a short poem, I want to read more!
From Turner class:
‘Fantastic’ said Zoe,
‘Funny and silly’, says Joesfine.
‘I like the way you describe the worm’, Zacky
Ciara say, ‘I think it’s wiggletastic!!!’
Wow that is really good I like the bit were you say wiggling is fun !
maybe you could put a coma between wriggling and is?
Well done! Good effort Hope. I like the fact that you chose to write a poem. Adding a picture draws the readers attention. But just be careful you use. By any chance, are worms your favourite insect/animal? When you write a short poem, I want to read more!
From Turner class:
‘Fantastic’ said Zoe,
‘Funny and silly’, says Joesfine.
‘I like the way you describe the worm’, Zacky
Ciara say, ‘I think it’s wiggletastic!!!’
I really like it because it rimes but you culd inprove on nothing.