Hi Imogen. This is a very good and amusing description of your trip to Hampton Court. You have conjured up the atmosphere of the trip very well. I wish I had been able to go as I love old buildings like Hampton Court. Well done!
Imogen,
This is your best piece of writing so far! I really like the ending about the ghost… You even gave some quotes! Keep up the good work!
Rupert
Your puntuation was all corect and you made me want to go agian ! I found your work realy amazing
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Hi Imogen. This is a very good and amusing description of your trip to Hampton Court. You have conjured up the atmosphere of the trip very well. I wish I had been able to go as I love old buildings like Hampton Court. Well done!
Imogen,
This is your best piece of writing so far! I really like the ending about the ghost… You even gave some quotes! Keep up the good work!
Rupert
Your puntuation was all corect and you made me want to go agian ! I found your work realy amazing