I like it very much, I can see you really worked hard getting it so well presentated. I don’t really think you have discribed wildlife brilliantly. I do know it is hard to give a exellent discription using this sort of poem. I like the way you have made the begining of each word spell ‘WILDLIFE’. I think this peice of work is exstradinary.
Well done Alfie. I like the fact that you made a collage of pictures describing the title and you wrote a poem called an acrostic poem. Maybe next time you could explore other poems that you do not know of. A good website for you to look at different poems is: http://www.kathimitchell.com/poemtypes.html
Just make sure you write your work in a clear colour so everyone can see your writing. What is your favourite type of wildlife?
I like it very much, I can see you really worked hard getting it so well presentated. I don’t really think you have discribed wildlife brilliantly. I do know it is hard to give a exellent discription using this sort of poem. I like the way you have made the begining of each word spell ‘WILDLIFE’. I think this peice of work is exstradinary.
Well done Alfie. I like the fact that you made a collage of pictures describing the title and you wrote a poem called an acrostic poem. Maybe next time you could explore other poems that you do not know of. A good website for you to look at different poems is: http://www.kathimitchell.com/poemtypes.html
Just make sure you write your work in a clear colour so everyone can see your writing. What is your favourite type of wildlife?
Hi Alfie,
I really liked your post. It stood out because it was so colourful and the pictures worked really well with the acrostic. Keep writing!
I like the way you have said it in guest words . You could inprove on a little bit about wild life why you like it.