Wow, It was a great 100wc this week, Jessica. I love how you used the word, inhaled although I hate the smell of lavender! How did you come up with such a great idea? I hope that you visit my blog like I did yours at, http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Emilia
High Lawn Primary, Bolton.
Hello,
what a wonderful 100 word challenge. I loved how you remebered all your commas in the right places. It was quite sad at the the end when you said you got chocolate over your best dress. I hope you continue to do the 100 word challenge.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School. http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Wow! I think this piece of writting is really good. I like the bit where you say about the scent of the lavender because it shows what smells you smelt.
WELL DONE JESSICA!
Hi Jessica
Really enjoyed reading our your Easter Egg Hunt. Your use of language was particulary good as it made me easily picture what was happening. Good use of punctuation to add drama. A few more adjectives and it would have been even better.
Hello Jessica,
I’m Annalise from High Lawn Primary, I just want to say that your 100wc is so, so great I would be grabing as many eggs as I can as well, well done and keep it up. I bet your teacher is really proud of you so a masive well done. Great job.
I will hoping to be coming on your blog more to comment on your amazing blog and work.
From Annalise at High awn Primary School.
Please leave an wonderful comment on our blog thankyou. http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Hope you have an nice Easter…
WOAH! Jessica your 100WC is fantastic, You have used some great adjectives eg: ‘inhaled’ and many more. Maybe next time though you coul;d include a few more openers. Apart from that your 100WC was awesome.
Hello Jessica,
I’m Annalise from High Lawn Primary, I just want to say that your 100wc is so, so great I would be grabing as many eggs as I can as well, well done and keep it up. I bet your teacher is really proud of you so a masive well done. Great job.
I will hoping to be coming on your blog more to comment on your amazing blog and work.
Wow Jessica! Your 100 word challenge was fabulous. I hope that you enjoyed all of the goodies that you had collected. By the way I don’t really like the smell of lavender but I do like the smell of delectible chocolate. Also at the end it was a shame your best dress got ruined. Well done!
Come to our blog http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Hi Jessica, I think your work is really good. I loved how you wrote “inhaling the lovely sent of lavender” because it emphsises the smell of the garden. Keep up the good work! (;
Wow, It was a great 100wc this week, Jessica. I love how you used the word, inhaled although I hate the smell of lavender! How did you come up with such a great idea? I hope that you visit my blog like I did yours at,
http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Emilia
High Lawn Primary, Bolton.
Hello,
what a wonderful 100 word challenge. I loved how you remebered all your commas in the right places. It was quite sad at the the end when you said you got chocolate over your best dress. I hope you continue to do the 100 word challenge.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School.
http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Wow! I think this piece of writting is really good. I like the bit where you say about the scent of the lavender because it shows what smells you smelt.
WELL DONE JESSICA!
Hi Jessica
Really enjoyed reading our your Easter Egg Hunt. Your use of language was particulary good as it made me easily picture what was happening. Good use of punctuation to add drama. A few more adjectives and it would have been even better.
Hello Jessica,
I’m Annalise from High Lawn Primary, I just want to say that your 100wc is so, so great I would be grabing as many eggs as I can as well, well done and keep it up. I bet your teacher is really proud of you so a masive well done. Great job.
I will hoping to be coming on your blog more to comment on your amazing blog and work.
From Annalise at High awn Primary School.
Please leave an wonderful comment on our blog thankyou.
http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Hope you have an nice Easter…
This is a brilliant piece of writing Jessica! I really enjoyed reading it, and you used very effective vocabulary. Well done!
WOAH! Jessica your 100WC is fantastic, You have used some great adjectives eg: ‘inhaled’ and many more. Maybe next time though you coul;d include a few more openers. Apart from that your 100WC was awesome.
ps:why not visit my blog at http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net/
Hello Jessica,
I’m Annalise from High Lawn Primary, I just want to say that your 100wc is so, so great I would be grabing as many eggs as I can as well, well done and keep it up. I bet your teacher is really proud of you so a masive well done. Great job.
I will hoping to be coming on your blog more to comment on your amazing blog and work.
Wow Jessica! Your 100 word challenge was fabulous. I hope that you enjoyed all of the goodies that you had collected. By the way I don’t really like the smell of lavender but I do like the smell of delectible chocolate. Also at the end it was a shame your best dress got ruined. Well done!
Come to our blog http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net
Hi Jessica, I think your work is really good. I loved how you wrote “inhaling the lovely sent of lavender” because it emphsises the smell of the garden. Keep up the good work! (;