I love this one Louis! I can just imagine the American president taking that decision! I love the word ‘gloop’. Says it all. Thanks for joining the 100WC & I hope to see you again!
Happy Easter Louis, this is a very impressive piece of writing. Your use of language is great and you have a wonderful imagination to match. You used italics well to also emphasis a point. This is great work, your next step is to also include some connectives such as because, as well as ….
Keep up the great work and well done for taking part in the 100WC.
I love this one Louis! I can just imagine the American president taking that decision! I love the word ‘gloop’. Says it all. Thanks for joining the 100WC & I hope to see you again!
Happy Easter Louis, this is a very impressive piece of writing. Your use of language is great and you have a wonderful imagination to match. You used italics well to also emphasis a point. This is great work, your next step is to also include some connectives such as because, as well as ….
Keep up the great work and well done for taking part in the 100WC.
I liked your story. I wish I had a bunny that size.