Hi Jessica,
I love your peice of work here. I think 1299 is your best fiction work. That is just my point of veiw. Other people might like others but i like this one of your many. I think it is strange that they think that computer games are healthy! My one factor that you could inprove is could you make it clearer who was talking. Well done.
Hi Jessica,
I love your peice of work here. I think 1299 is your best fiction work. That is just my point of veiw. Other people might like others but i like this one of your many. I think it is strange that they think that computer games are healthy! My one factor that you could inprove is could you make it clearer who was talking. Well done.