Turner class read your blog in our ICT lesson: ‘How adventerous’ said Ciara.
‘Your writing is brilliant’ said Adam.
Tony agrees that ‘It was a really, really, really, great trip’
Wow Liam, You’ve used some great descriptive words in there! I love some of the creative words like waded, however make sure you use capitals and punctuation correctly e.g leave a space after the piece of punctuation. I also loved how you’ve used a real experience as an idea
Well written Liam. You really thought about this one. You have a very good imagination – MUM
Turner class read your blog in our ICT lesson: ‘How adventerous’ said Ciara.
‘Your writing is brilliant’ said Adam.
Tony agrees that ‘It was a really, really, really, great trip’
Turner
Thank you so much for reading my blog i really epreciate it.
Wow Liam, You’ve used some great descriptive words in there! I love some of the creative words like waded, however make sure you use capitals and punctuation correctly e.g leave a space after the piece of punctuation. I also loved how you’ve used a real experience as an idea
Well Done liam,
It is clear that you have put a lot of effort into this piece of writing. Did you know that my uncle lives in Adelaide?
Thank you Rafi for commenting on my work and no I didn’t know your uncle lived
In Adelaide .