Hi Ida,
Your poem is very creative and very informative. Yo’ve used some great pictures and have inspired me to start putting pictures on them… Did you think of this poem all by yourself, if so maybe next time you could make the sentences rhyme?!
Hi,
I really like how you have set out the pictures and written about something so true. Maybe next time you could use a corresponding colour to the background.
Hi Ida
your poem is so true and really makes you want to help people in Africa.I like the way the pictures match your points in the poem.maybe you could improve it even more and do something like ryming cuplets.
Hi Ida,
Your poem is very creative and very informative. Yo’ve used some great pictures and have inspired me to start putting pictures on them… Did you think of this poem all by yourself, if so maybe next time you could make the sentences rhyme?!
Hi,
I really like how you have set out the pictures and written about something so true. Maybe next time you could use a corresponding colour to the background.
Hi Ida
your poem is so true and really makes you want to help people in Africa.I like the way the pictures match your points in the poem.maybe you could improve it even more and do something like ryming cuplets.
Thanks Elena It will do moor ryming cuplets.
hi ida,
realy enjoyed reading this