Children love to play-Tanka poem

Posted on April 2, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Children love to play-Tanka poem

  1. Ida says:
    April 4, 2012 at 9:07 am

    It is really good because it is fall of discription you could in prove on making all of it ryme but really good.

  2. Alfie Z says:
    May 2, 2012 at 6:57 pm

    Thanks for your comment,Ida but since it was a tanka poem I didn’t really need to make it rhyme.

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