100wc- The CEE Takeaway.

Posted on April 6, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to 100wc- The CEE Takeaway.

  1. Clare Powell (Team 100WC) says:
    April 10, 2012 at 4:24 pm

    I like your use of dialogue in this piece of writing Ryan. You have used some excellent verbs, especially the word ‘stomping’. You have put your own slant on the prompt as I can not find the promt

    ‘the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun’

    Next time, check that you have included the prompt in your writing.

    Thanks for joining the 100WC.

  2. AlfieE says:
    April 17, 2012 at 9:29 am

    Hello Ryan. What a brilliant blog. What amazing description. I love how you ended it: “Give me my 20 dollars back now!” But don’ t you think 20 dollars is a bit much for a easter egg?

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