What an action packed 100WC entry Alfie! I thought your story had a good structure, and you built up to the (very sad) ending very well. I could just picture the bunnies having their party in the forest, and I liked your use of a question (“Did it walk there??!”) to add interest. Keep up the great work!
Well done Alfie, a lovely story you’ve certainly used your 100 words well and thought about each one. It made me think of The Snowman by Raymond Briggs. Well done!
What an action packed 100WC entry Alfie! I thought your story had a good structure, and you built up to the (very sad) ending very well. I could just picture the bunnies having their party in the forest, and I liked your use of a question (“Did it walk there??!”) to add interest. Keep up the great work!
Well done Alfie, a lovely story you’ve certainly used your 100 words well and thought about each one. It made me think of The Snowman by Raymond Briggs. Well done!