What a fantastic poem Rafi!
It is very impressive to see such a mature piece of poetry. It is very clear to see that your grandmother means a lot to you and I’m sure she would be very proud to read this. Have you shown it to her?
I hope she enjoyed her birthday.
Keep up the great writing!
This is a fantastic poem. I really enjoyed how heart felt your poem is. The way you used your words carefully to describe your grandmother shows you have a very good relationship with her. I had a good relationship with my grandmother as well therefore this poem has brought back some memorises. Thank you so very much for writing a lovely poem.
What a fantastic poem Rafi!
It is very impressive to see such a mature piece of poetry. It is very clear to see that your grandmother means a lot to you and I’m sure she would be very proud to read this. Have you shown it to her?
I hope she enjoyed her birthday.
Keep up the great writing!
This is a fantastic poem. I really enjoyed how heart felt your poem is. The way you used your words carefully to describe your grandmother shows you have a very good relationship with her. I had a good relationship with my grandmother as well therefore this poem has brought back some memorises. Thank you so very much for writing a lovely poem.