Haha. Very good use of words. I love the word ‘lucious’. I love chocolate too. But once I saw this box of Belgian chocolates
selling for £334.00! What inspired you to write this? Do you love chocolate too? To improve maybe you could not put a space in outstanding.
Hi, well done Joel.Your poem was great.I loved the description and the poem cheered me up.If you were to work on it mabye use a varity of words.
Good luck on your next piece!!
Haha. Very good use of words. I love the word ‘lucious’. I love chocolate too. But once I saw this box of Belgian chocolates
selling for £334.00! What inspired you to write this? Do you love chocolate too? To improve maybe you could not put a space in outstanding.
Hi, well done Joel.Your poem was great.I loved the description and the poem cheered me up.If you were to work on it mabye use a varity of words.
Good luck on your next piece!!